Looking for feedback on subtitle for book
Posted on September 8, 2026 at 08:38:05 AM by Paul
(edited September 8, 2026 at 08:39:15 AM)
For the last two years, since November of 2024, I've been working on a book with the title The Triumph of Stupidity.
Here's the basic statement of purpose from the intro:
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A central thesis of the book is a multi-faceted elaboration of Fran Lebowitzâs 2018 dictum, formed after 40 years of observing her fellow New York City resident: âYou do not know anyone as stupid as Donald Trump. You just donât.â This, the available evidence more than adequately demonstrates, is hardly hyperbole, and it is a key to understanding a national disaster of almost indescribable proportions.
Yet this book also lays out the very considerable extent to which Trump and Trumpism are symptoms rather than causes of that disaster, although of course they are both. Indeed, The Triumph of Stupidity is in the end primarily about the cultural conditions that made Trump and his movement possible. In this sense we might say that, given the state of America in the early decades of the 21st century, if Donald Trump had not existed, it would have been necessary to invent him. Trump, as we shall see, is not president despite his stupidity, but rather very much because of it. In short, the underlying cause of Trumpism is -- to use a term playing off Cory Doctorowâs all too useful concept of âenshittificationâ --the general enstupidization of American life, that Trump himself has both exploited and exacerbated.
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I'm continuing to revise and update the manuscript, and plan to do so through the midterms eight weeks from today, before trying to sell this version of it. The book also now includes a 6,300-word appendix, featuring 115 specific instances of Trumpian stupidity, with links, for the TL;DR generation.
Anyway, my question is this. I'm trying to come up with a subtitle, and am considering
THE TRIUMPH OF STUPIDITY: AMERICA IN THE AGE OF TRUMP
THE TRIUMPH OF STUPIDITY: AMERICA AFTER A DECADE OF TRUMPISM
I'm wondering if anybody has an opinion on which one of those would work better.
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Looking for feedback on subtitle for book
- By Paul
September 8, 2026 at 08:38:05 AM
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I prefer the first.*
- By kccambo
September 8, 2026 at 12:40:08 PM
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The title, of course, begs the question why are we so fucking stupid? Who benefits from a stupid population? Maybe the book asks these already. *
- By jhamm
September 8, 2026 at 10:26:17 AM
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The Triumph of Stupidity: The Ascendance of the Kurts*
- By Poster P
September 8, 2026 at 10:22:25 AM
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The Lost decade *
- By Connollywasthere
September 8, 2026 at 09:58:47 AM
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How Willful Ignorance Trumps All**
- By jBdub
September 8, 2026 at 09:51:05 AM
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I don't think Trump is stupid at all. He's taking advantage of the stupidity of the American people*
- By MaizeInTx
September 8, 2026 at 09:44:47 AM
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THE TRIUMPH OF STUPIDITY: WHY TRUMP WAS ELECTED TWICE*
- By ajs
September 8, 2026 at 09:43:41 AM
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Why not just: "The Triumph of Stupidity: Trump's America." Less wordy. Better describes your thesis.*
- By tman
September 8, 2026 at 09:42:27 AM
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My argument for what drives the decline of late stage capitalism is centered around nepotism
- By Ks
September 8, 2026 at 09:24:00 AM
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THE TRIUMPH OF STUPIDITY: BIG TITS AND BIGGER SHITS *
- By Nikos
September 8, 2026 at 09:18:35 AM
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Like the first much better, like the others I donât like âTrumpismâ here***
- By Craig
September 8, 2026 at 09:01:10 AM
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I don't care much for either of those. How about: "How MAGA chose ignorance over fact."
- By GoBrew
September 8, 2026 at 08:59:33 AM
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Also dislike "Trumpism".*
- By ftb
September 8, 2026 at 08:51:22 AM
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Re: Looking for feedback on subtitle for book
- By jfitz
September 8, 2026 at 08:42:11 AM
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The Triumph of Stupidity: How America Made Trump Possible*
- By uncwolverine
September 8, 2026 at 08:40:47 AM
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